Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Blog #9

General statement
- Child obesity
Focus
-How to help parents prevent their children from becoming obese
Support
-parents that have children that are obese. And what could happen to them
Sources

The next steps if this topic approves
-making sure I have good sources
-have a outline
-talk to doctors that I know
The difficulties
-making sure I have a strong thesis statement  so my paper could make sense
-what would be relevant to my paper

3 comments:

  1. I thought we were only suppose to pick from the meatrix issues list. Well anyway good luck. Getting doctor comments should surely be a good source.

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  2. The topic is great. You can analyze unhealthy eating behavior is the reason of child obesity. Good luck.

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  3. Great topic. And you narrowed it down.You should be able to find lots of information.

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